Um, I hope you don't mind a month late review, but um:

ASDLJ GREAT JOB, I LOVE IT. XD Man, I read the whole story in one sitting and I'm fangirling like crazy (at 5am 8D). I'm gonna be repetetive and shit and compliment you on your writing and description. Also, that was a very evil cliff hanger. Can't wait for more~ ♥