ext_98110 ([identity profile] katiedistance.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] firstlight 2006-10-01 11:05 am (UTC)

I rather like your Fuji. I wouldn't say he's OOC, only rather more talkative than other times. Still, when he's alone with Tezuka it's natural that they talk.
I also like your Tezuka a lot. You use his stoic features quite well in the context of the fic.
And I also liked the bit about Fuji losing his smile when Yuuta found out about what he does... very dramatic.

I loved this. *mems* :D

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