*laughs* Me, I think I should be appalled because the three earlier chapters of the AU are probably better on the sentence level than the two I've just written! (the thought that I have not improved at all is seriously scary, though it does mean that the voice-shift, though present, is a bit less jarring. The fact that Oshitari has had a personality transplant, we shall not discuss.)
HOW DARE YOU DEPRIVE ME OF CYBERPUNK KIRIHARA!!!!!!??????
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Date: 2008-07-08 10:35 am (UTC)HOW DARE YOU DEPRIVE ME OF CYBERPUNK KIRIHARA!!!!!!??????