I really really enjoyed reading that. =] You write the rikkai's so well...I can just so imagine it all being like that. I don't really get to see much of rikkai...which is bit of a disappointment. But I have to say that they are one of my favourite teams. Maybe even my favourite.
I think this is the first time reading a JaBun fic. I think they are really sweet. The way Jackal gets slightly embarrassed when Marui compliments him. The way Marui really appreciates having him as a friend. His realization of life, and how everything doesn't necessarily work out the way you want it to.
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Date: 2006-01-04 08:26 pm (UTC)I think this is the first time reading a JaBun fic. I think they are really sweet. The way Jackal gets slightly embarrassed when Marui compliments him. The way Marui really appreciates having him as a friend. His realization of life, and how everything doesn't necessarily work out the way you want it to.
Will be waiting for more fics from you. =]